Young gun

Hi First and foremost....thanks for keeping the poem short and simple and easy to understand. About grammar.....run this through MS word and you should be ok. The spirit of the ...

This poem was written very well for a first shows that you have got the required talent for poetry. However, you must try to improvise on the flow of the ...

Hi I must say....great job done on keeping it short and effective. The imagery was really alive and the power of fire was shown like never before.I liked the magnificence ...

This was a pretty good one.Really simple with no "deep" meaning to understand. Very nice description of the jungle and the observations of the tigers.I guess this poem had something ...

Quite insightful,yet feels a little incomplete. Stanza 1: Happiness is a present, Given to you by friends. Take it for granted, That’s when your friendship ends. Very well written lines ...

Hi To be honest I have never come across work written in such style.Completely unconventional,interesting,meaningful........fantastic idea about change. The way the poem unfolded telling a story was r

Hi This poem I guess follows the theme of the human spirit and does that with clear examples. Even the tallest Mountains crumble; Beneath the travelers feet; A magnified image ...

This was some very short,very effective and very meaningful poem that makes the message very clear. Excellent use of the highly creative metaphor.The helplessness against stopping time from causing us

Hi This poem had a nice and understandable message.The idea was also presented in simple words. Stanza 1: Happiness, soul and the heart of me. This line seems a bit ...

Anyone who goes through tough and socially insecure times in life would completely understand what you mean. The emotional struggle of the narrator was completely sincere and did not give ...

Hi This poem was a really simple way of showing how different people live their sorrowful lives. You gave a great insight into households of different types with quite similar ...

Hi Great poem with lovely violent images but needs some simplification. Honestly,here is something that I could really not understand: Have the amazingly well constructed horrific images been added ju

Hi This was a great poem with a great message.Here is what might possibly help you improve this poem: If possible,try and cut back on the number of examples.Two or ...

This poem is not bad at does look like you have put in quite a lot of effort into this. The idea of the poem is unique and using the ...

This poem has a good idea behind it but it seemed to lack a little in effort. Stanza 1: The lines have been broken in an uneven manner and the ...